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I opened my eyes and looked at the number. 7212. It seemed like only yesterday that yesterday had happened, and yet I had been reliving this day for almost 20 years.I got up and got changed, made breakfast and packed my bag, in almost the same way as I had done 7000 or so times ago.
You see, two years ago, reset technology was invented. It was a chip that, when embedded in your head, allowed you to perform a reset at the end of a day. Simply speaking, if you didn't like how your day had panned out, you could trigger a reset by simply thinking it at exactly midnight. Doing so would send you back in time (doing the same thing to your memory) before dropping that little number in your head. People who had chosen not to reset would act out their day in the same mindset that they were in at the start of their last reset, without the chance to reset again. The day would only move forward when everyone had chosen not to reset, although everyone would only remember the most recent iteration of the previous day.
However, this often doesn't solve anything if the first reset doesn't work, and almost always doesn't after the tenth or so. You see, when you reset yourself, you forget everything that had happened in the day you were about to start, so if you were to crash into someone by accident, resetting is unlikely to do anything except tell you that you had wanted to reset that night. That knowledge alone is usually enough to tell you that you had messed up somewhere and cause you to be more cautious, thus allowing you to maybe avoid that accident.
Such knowledge is called a kick. Your number is a kick in itself, as you can make several inferences from that number. Once the number gets too high, however, it ceases to be a big enough kick and subsequent resets simply have you living through the day in exactly the same ways. Not enough new information is presented to you that would change your behavior so. Thus, past 10, you would probably need 100 resets before your behavior changed, then another 150 and so on and so forth...
Everyone and their mother got them, and this caused several quick changes in the world. For one, you couldn't gamble on races the same day they were held, and stock market transactions had to be done one day in advance, but interestingly enough, everything mostly stayed the same. However, us policemen quickly realised that criminals had to be dealt with very differently. For a few months, the crime rate shot up, but then we figured a temporary way around it while we tried to convince everyone else that we had to completely ban the usage of these chips.
As I drove to work, I tried to reason out exactly why I was on my seven thousandth try. It obviously meant that something horrible had happened during the football game we were covering, and it obviously meant that we knew we had a way of stopping it (or we would have stopped trying). We had a plan of coverage in the case of anything bad happening, and it was obviously taking a very long time to execute.
20 minutes later, I was in a meeting room with the rest of my team, the policemen who were going to cover the match. Greg, being the leader of our team, started speaking first.
"Right. Resets? Mine is 1764."
Janet next. "204." This caused a stir among the room. Two people? It probably did every time she had said the number.
Steven. "4935." Some wide-eyed looks at that number.
Ghadalfi. "2496." Julsey. "7212." Moran. "7212." Ericsson. "6982." Chang. "3891"
Johnson next. He said his number with a bit of a grin. "7211." Okay, this was big news. That meant that today was a big day. It was my turn to speak, and I was also smiling. "7212".
"Whew. Okay," Greg clapped his hands and drew everyone's attention. "It looks like we have at least 6 people we have to catch and not more than 9 or we would have given up on this. Let's go over our coverage plan to figure out who they are. I've already taken the files with me." Pulling some papers out of a folder, he put them down on the table and started to narrate from them. "Right. Because you," he pointed to me, "are still resetting, it means that the criminals are all ticketholders, whatever they plan to do. Stadium sits 30,000 so each person gets just over 5,000 people to cover. This means we're working on a split-search pattern. Janet was the first to stop resetting so our first guy is..." He counted on the stadium map. "Here. Section 2 seat 4 row 12, Alfred Court stand." Now remaining seats are 29796 and the next number is mine at 1764 so the person we're looking for is in seat...section 8 seat 8 row 3, Pavilion stand." By refusing a reset at certain points, we could get a system of communication going that would allow us to find people that had yet to commit a crime through us kicking each other. It just took a lot of time and a lot of resets.
Using this method, Greg went through everyone else's numbers and we found our suspects. We quickly emailed a list to stadium security, telling them to notify us if any of the suspects tried to get in early. After that, we went through our general plan. It was a fairly simple one; whenever one of them tried to use their ticket, we would hit them with a taser and arrest them once they were inside. Subduing and arrest was always our first attempt whenever we found a new criminal. We'd arrest them, citing 'intelligence', and look through their possessions. If we didn't find anything then we would all reset the next day and try a more reactive approach. If we did, then we would disable the chip with an EMP blast and follow proceedings accordingly. In relative silence, we left for the stadium. There was still a lot of work to do.
Standing at gate E, I received notification that the first two people had been subdued and arrested. Checking their bodies had revealed explosives taped to their sides. A bomb defusal team was immediately called to the stadium and the suspects were moved somewhere out of sight. Twenty minutes later, all 6 had been caught and subdued, with most of the bombs defused. I breathed a sigh of relief, but I knew that it wasn't over yet. We might have still let a few in (ones that we hadn't found using our kick method) and so we moved into our positions, a much heavier concentration of us in areas that we hadn't checked yet.
As the game progressed, I reflected on our situation. Nothing untoward had yet to happen, but my worries were no longer about today, to a certain extent. No criminals had seemed to figure out what we (and police forces around the world) were doing, but if anyone had then we would never catch them. Still, it was only a matter of time before everyone else figured us out, and we wouldn't win this arms race. Those 6 could have bought multiple tickets and alternated spots to throw us off, they could have only sent some people every reset, they could have a seventh person watching from outside, ready to reset if needed.....
There were so many ways for them to work around us it was insane. Hopefully this case would help us make a better point against these chips.
The game ended and people all filtered out of the stadium, not knowing that disaster had been averted. All they would remember was a rather unexciting nil all draw between two rather ordinary (I would know, I was a fan of one of the teams) sides. Suddenly, the weight of those 7000 days weighed down on me. All that 'time' spent, and nobody around to see us spend it.
The team met up at the pub for drinks afterwards, all laughs and smiles about our success. None of us talked about those seven thousand days. None of us talked about how different things could have turned out. We all stayed awake, consciously denying a reset. When there were only a few seconds left until midnight, we all stopped talking and watched it tick down in silence.
Greg. "0." Janet. "0." Steven. "0." Ghadalfi. "0."...
TardWrangl3r
I thought it was going to be a love story about the perfect day you just want to keep on reliving or something. This was solid too though
MortAura
I want to see this made into a movie, that would be an absolute mindfuck to watch and it would be amazing
Djjazzyhorn
You earned this upvote. I wish I could give you more
V1V2Rotate
Reminds me of Groundhog Day
aroseisaroseisaBITCH
There is a short story I read a while ago that had a similar theme - I'll find it if you're interested!
reux
"Groundhog Slay"
slamnfreak
I wonder often if I've lived this day before, but then I remember, I've asked that same question. And, I haven't seen this episode, so...
OysterDoll
I don't think I get it. Cop relives this day for 20 years then finally catches the bad guys? How is everyone else so blown away by that?
OysterDoll
Or am I missing something?
ThePotatoJar
#makeitabook. Now.
trumpypumpyinyourrumpy
StabbyMcMurder
Cool story, bro.
MemeStealingSkeleton
Hitler "9999"
KimJongSpoon
"If this technology is only two years old, how did they reset it daily for 20 years?" -- my dumb brain.
InternetLawyer
The first thing I thought of, if I had this ability (only 1 person) is I know myself well enough that I would relive the worst day of 1/2
InternetLawyer
my life for all eternity. I wouldn't be able to move on knowing I could forget it or try to stop it every day. 2/2
Boboncalc
Wow man. Just..... Wow
whyexactly
Except you just get stuck in a massive loop of an extra terrorist resetting if they fail and everyone else resetting if they succeed...
OfficialMaxBox
I was expecting something like everyone's numbers being super high due to a world-ending event of some some sorts.
ATimeTravellingRobotFromTheFuture
Great story but what if a terrorist blew a bomb five seconds after midnight? I imagine Interpol would have a lot more people assigned
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countries and regions so they could lock down crimes on the other side of the world to them and have a 24hour period to try and stop it.
nothingtowritehomeabout
Kinda like when Gob keeps taking his forget me now pills and goes into a downward spiral
AbacusFinch
Thanks for making a tl:dr in the layman's terms
theycallmetherattlesnake
i just watched the entirety of Arrested Development and this was my first thought as well.
KingTox
Hello darkness my old friend
juderamone
nicely done!
theguybehindtheguybehindtheguy
Too much exposition. Stay away from exposition. It kills the interest of the reader.
hartmonica
hought that too but realized he's just staying true to the narrator trying to sound like a cop, who probably has an expositive inner voice
IStoppedGivingADamnALongTimeAgo
I have to agree with FlamboyantChalk. This legitimately held my interest to the end, and that's not something easily done.
oGalaxy
Make this a book where a guy somehow damaged his chip and he stops forgetting things and rarely he will forget things. +1
Mechlai
My first reaction would be that this would be overpowered of him, but then I realize he's gonna live the same day forever cause someone 1/2
Mechlai
will always reset... unless we are going with multiverse theory (which we arent) which would mean the time travel effect branches him away
Mentok
If this required every single person to not reset, there will always be one person who does, even if to fuck with everyone else
GetBlazedSon
I see you've met me. :)
TacticalSanta
Every try will be executed all at once, you will experience everyone elses final try as they should yours, so just 1 try essentially
TacticalSanta
They should never in theory see a 0 as when the next day starts the execution of simultaneous tries will just put you on your last
ughthisblows
Upvoted to 666. Muahaha
FlamboyantChalk
It wouldnt matter. If everyday everyone woke up and saw 0 they would think everything is fine. It might repeat forever but noone would know.
marsgoose
Yup, someone would find a good show, and potato marathon re-watch it every day until the end of time.
LawsOnMe
Yassss. I want to rewatch Mad Men with no memory of it or even Netflix's Love. Those shows added happiness to my life.
Delathi
Wife died of cancer in the afternoon... reset this day forever.
heywhuddupImgur
I'm sorry for your loss
Konijntje
wakichunu
So you want to see your wife die over and over?
Delathi
Or have the morning again, and again. Depends on how it went really, but how many people would redo forever to never have to lose someone?
TheNoblePizzaDragonWhoLivesInYourFridge
I have a character who watched his pregnant wife go squish underneath the basement floor of a mansion, he would repeat that day eternally
TheNoblePizzaDragonWhoLivesInYourFridge
just to spend the morning with her
Thor73
That was the plot for an episode SG1 and the dilemma surrounding it. Great episode.
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karmaslap
Best time loop Episode of SG1 was when they ended up golfing through the Stargate and Oneill kissed Carter.
januskincaid
Ugh. Sounds like you need to go back a little ways, maybe. Sorry to hear that @Delathi.
Delathi
Is just a story.
januskincaid
Ah. Wish there had been some way to, you know, know that.
FaceDownButtUp
and you got downvoted for that. Lol
icameinlikeafeckingball
Imagine you’ve just spent 7212 days trying to stop a terrorist attack and you wake up on day #7213 because some wanker had a shitty day.
GeorgeSmiley
This is why it fails, you would show 0 in your counter so all the info you were trying to pass to the next day is lost.
icameinlikeafeckingball
No, it’d show 7212 because you’d just relive the day but knowing it was a reset and without the possibility of resetting yourself, (1)
GeorgeSmiley
yeah others pointed that out I hadn't gotten that but like you said, no way you could get everyone to not reset on any given day
icameinlikeafeckingball
and you’d probably be stuck forever because let’s be honest, there’s always going to be someone resetting. (2)
GeorgeSmiley
yep I agree, I don't think you could ever get all the people on the planet to agree that any one specific day was not worth doing over
DehydratedBoogers
It's basically infinite universes but growing off of each other instead of expanding side by side.
Flyndaran
No one invoked multiple universes only altering history.
FlamboyantChalk
Its the same universe but it repeats and if you have a number it changes.
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fuckusingimguronaphoneitsucks
And how can they have different reset numbers for one day?
FlamboyantChalk
The numbers arent universal. You only get a tick if you chose to reset. Even if the day repeated 9000 times you could still have a 0.
PorkShenanigans
Because when a cop finds the person they are looking for using a specific search pattern, they stop resetting. So everyone who hasn't /1
PorkShenanigans
Wakes up with incremented numbers but anyone who has starts the day with the same number as the day they found the bad guy
PorkShenanigans
But this makes no sense, because everyone else can use their numbers to change behavior. This whole idea makes no sense.
shorr
Why's that? I mean, they do remark it's pretty easy to prevent if caught on. And it does need high trust
TheJazzGhost
Why didn't they just cancel the football game?
Demicol
Maybe they wanted to catch the people who were willing to kill 30,000 people. You know so they can't do it somewhere else.
TheJazzGhost
I get that, but by doing this, a ton of people are dying 7000 times, even if they don't remember it. Is that unethical? IDK.
FaceDownButtUp
Also, the people died 7000 times, but it's ok, they have chips in their brains to resurrect them and put them back together
InnerBushman
That's not how it works. The chip brings the living back in time, effectively undoing the deaths of those who died this day.
texasdean
How can it be unethical if it never happened? Hooray for paradoxical anomalies!
Flyndaran
It happened but then it un-happened. You assume un-happening is the same as never happened. That's a moral not objective question.
KelKrist
Time to start mourning the infinite amount of people who are dead/going to die in alternate realities...
Sinia
The bombers would live to reset the day.
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shorr
They destroyed the chips of caught ones
TheJazzGhost
That is a fantastic point. Thank you.
Geoplex
They mentioned disabling their chips with EMP devices, didn't they?
mmurrbles
How would they know who to EMP?
shorr
When caught. That's why they need to catch them first. Cancelling just makes them change plans
Geoplex
Yeah, I don't find it very believable that the bad-guys just weren't smart enough to figure out how to get around it. Fun story regardless
shorr
They do touch that too. I guess in the previous iterations they succeeded and thus didn't reset
somenooblikeyou
Lets make this a movie or TV show PRONTO.
saand360
At first I thought it would be a person reliving the best day of their life, but I love this story so much more!
DoYouSleepLateBecauseOfMovies
You should read the rest of the stories posted under this Writing Prompt. E.G - A married couple choose to re-live their wedding day.
CalvadosConfiture
I thought it would be someone spending their last day with loved ones again >>;
Impressive44
I thought it was going to be someone reliving the last day of humanity.
vrock451
I thought it would be his wife died every time and he continually tried to find a way to stop it but never could.
Flyndaran
He wakes up at 8:15. His child gets hit by a car across the street at 8:25. Maybe next time he'll check on his kids and get out in time.
ohHiMark2000
Time travel is the greatest mind fuck of them all
fuckusingimguronaphoneitsucks
9/10 time time travel is just idiotic because paradoxes
Flyndaran
That assumes we understand things enough to say paradoxes aren't just our misunderstanding of reality. Like nonsense Zen koans.
Flyndaran
What is the sound of one hand clapping? The issue is that clapping is defined as two hands striking each other, so the question's a paradox.
Dystakruul
Well I can clap with one hand
Dystakruul
Just smash your fingers against your palm; with a bit practice, it produces clapping sounds so I would consider it clapping. PARADOX BUSTED!
TheUrbanShamanIsDeadAgain
A time travel drug. What are the withdrawals?
FaceDownButtUp
Hallucinations of the things you did/things that happened to you before you traveled back in time
ohHiMark2000
Mad tripping
Joeycheeks1
Flashbacks, deja vu, memory loss
atamprin
The Spanish Inquisition
ohHiMark2000
I didn't expect that
Leifinator
tl;dr: fucking read it
shadow0519
But....but... Ugh.
PGMacDesign
I read "read" as past tense read and laughed thinking that was the summary.
Asesandu
Thank you!
EasilyAmewsed
That will be the title for the next one which will be even longer
warispeace
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EasilyAmewsed
The next new story is like 25,000 words(50 pages) is that too long?
OfficialUsernameChecker
I need more now. Like right effing now
SandyMakai
I read it, and I don't get it :/
EliteHatter
Same. I think he reset for the company of his team?
HiIAmGod
It was the first time they got all of the bombs. 20 solid years of trying. Would be a great moment
Yonabeth
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Hassassin33
. Link here please
IChangedMyUsernameToDangerous
Wouldn't they notice 20 years of aging over night? Or what if a player, assuming it's a contact sport, gets hurt?
IChangedMyUsernameToDangerous
Otherwise this phenomenal @op, I was hoping it would end well and I am amazed at the originality, is it your oc?
EasilyAmewsed
Negative, it is a friends, who was scared to put it anywhere
MnemonicMonkeys
They don't age between resets.
GeorgeSmiley
If one person relives their day everyone has to relive their day.
MoooCow
Second paragraph mentions that
GeorgeSmiley
but not the fact that some random guy who had finally after 200 attempts gotten his day right, but now the cops reset it and screwed (1/3)
GeorgeSmiley
his kicks to himself. So now he is starting from scratch. But the cops finally catch all the bombers and don't reset, but that random(2/3)
GeorgeSmiley
guy does because he hasn't gotten it right again so he resets and all the cops wake up with 0's and lost all their info.
FaceDownButtUp
They'll see 0 and won't remember the earlier versions. So they don't know they've relived it thousands of times.
GeorgeSmiley
which is why one day would go on forever. The cops reset and all the people who finally got their day right would have their counter (1/2)
GeorgeSmiley
go back to 0. So they don't know they have been trying. The cops get it right, but some guy in India screwed up and he resets and all(2/3)
GeorgeSmiley
the cops are at 0 and lost all the info they had been "kicking" to each other and are back at square one.
FaceDownButtUp
Damn. That's a good point, fuck
TheZulthar
But they don't know that
GeorgeSmiley
That's the point. When the cops get it all correct and don't reset they wake up on day 7214 with a zero in their display because (1/)2
GeorgeSmiley
someone in Tokyo split mustard on their favorite shirt.
Shewy92
The whole reset premise is sloppy. If one person wants to reset does that mean all 7 billion have to reset?Why can't the bombers reset too?
GeorgeSmiley
you would immediately get into an infinate loop as soon as 2 people want conflicting results.
CalvadosConfiture
Not a great idea when applied as technology, yeah. Interesting prompt, bad execution.
umikaloo
I don't think anyone else knows about the resets, sorta like groundhog day.
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PleaseDisperseNothingToSeeHere
And do you still age? If not, resetting every day makes you eternal.
Phraxonomy
Also, what happens in other time zones? is there a crossover or do some people have to reset in the middle of the day?
INeverThoughtIdMakeThisAccount
Maybe it's a world without timezones. Or they only think it's global but they're the only ones who can reset. Idk, it gets complex quick.
JohnBlevins
As for the bombers, OP states they blast the reset chip with an EMP. Doesn't say anything about other people resetting. But I think the (1)
JohnBlevins
number is only how many times YOU choose to reset. If resets can occur infinitely, then eventually everyone will NOT reset. (2)
GeorgeSmiley
so they catch all the bombers and no one resets, but somewhere in Australia a guy resets because his dog got hit by a car, so the cops (1/2)
GeorgeSmiley
all wake up with 0's and have to start all over again.
JohnBlevins
The numbers are persistent. It's how many times YOU reset that one particular day. Someone else resetting doesn't reset your countdown
JohnBlevins
The cops numbers don't increase, they are unaware of this reset. They do things exactly as they did in their successful reset.
WhoTheFuckisGavin
1) you don't know if someone else resetted, only if you did it yourself. 2) they emp fried the chips of the bombers
Bendercrackedcorn
You'll know your plan to bomb a stadium didn't work, and thus reset.
TigerswilldoANYTHINGforatunafishsandwich
I think they say you choose whether to reset or not that night, not just any time during the day. EMP before choosing time and you're good.
GeorgeSmiley
after 7213 days the cops catch all the bombers so none of them hit the reset, but somewhere some guy screwed up his first date and (1/2)
GeorgeSmiley
resets the day. The cops all wake up on day 7214 with a zero flashing on their display, all the info they got over the last 7213 days gone
Freemasonry
The issue is that the bombers' reset chips are fried, they can't initiate the reset anymore.
EXiSTENCEthreshold
Unless they use the same kicking method that the police forces use.
icameinlikeafeckingball
Except there’s six of them, and they don’t catch them all at the first try, and they only fry the ones they’ve caught.
69NAZ
1/2Lets say there's 6 bombers. 1st day all 6 explode succesfully. Cops reset. Their count is now 1, bombers count is 0 because they did not
69NAZ
2/2 reset. On reset 1 they catch 1 bomber. They can't reset because they did not do it on 1st day, hence their count is 0 forever.