Dieselkraftwerk
10755
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I'm trying hard to improve, accept critiques and suggestions (:
Jul 31, 2017 7:24 AM
Dieselkraftwerk
10755
214
17
I'm trying hard to improve, accept critiques and suggestions (:
kworiginal
10/10
BirdmanSucked
Arrowse
Arkatie
Id say a 7/11
YouPostedThis
Would get as a tattoo, and I say that to few roses
ItsMrStealYoMemes
Gud
SweamSpoats
DontLookAtMyFav
I'd compromise at 3/5
exunodisceomnes
Well done :) imho work on increasing realism. Study arrows,roses etc & reproduce them to the best of your ability, lest our eyes complain ^^
bumhand
Don't have people evaluate your work. You had an experience and grew from making it. Now you're a better artist and person.
asscactus2001
Well done.Stylish to a degree.But the subject matter & medium are wanting.If art is your calling, then you need more weapons in the arsenal
wafflesismycatsname
Gorgeous! Maybe less dark tones and more of a middle tone, but it's still fab. And great if your going for darker too.
wafflesismycatsname
And I have to agree that the arrowhead does look a bit funky. But if you used a specific reference, then keep it as is.
Deswran
Do you have a more clear scan? It looks great and honestly would make a pretty bitchin tattoo
Sacurason
I agree. It's a nice, clean, reasonably simple concept that can be executed in a few different ways to make a neat tattoo :)
Dieselkraftwerk
Sorry but i don't have a very good camera or scanner. And the idea of someone using something i made as a tattoo is really cool..
ATimeTravellingRobotFromTheFuture
Pretty awesome. I like the style. Made me think of the art from old fighting fantasy books.
Noonelikeslars
Your composition/design layout is kinda funny. Try more range in values. Good contrast. It's a close up pick-make up work from distance.
Noonelikeslars
*-look at work from a distance
terrorofthederp
If adding an element which is known to be straight eg the arrow, using a ruler to give a centreline would help maintain positioning
Dieselkraftwerk
I used a ruler, but i see didn't went well
terrorofthederp
Love the design though!
Normy08
If Poison taught me anything, it's that every rose has its thorn.
wadeMFNwilson
Arrowhead is off center, they don't touch at the point, but are embedded in a split in the shaft 1/2
wadeMFNwilson
Also, the fletching (feathers) are short, try drawing a feather or similar. Overall, good start, hope I helped
Dieselkraftwerk
It really helped, thanks! :DD
DerpNessy
Overall it looks really nice! I think just the arrow alignment needs to be tweaked a smidge and the arrowhead itself looks off to me.
Dieselkraftwerk
Thanks!
TheLexicon
A rose that's been shot wouldn't be that perfect, show a bit of distress in the petals to add that extra touch of realism, roses also 1/2
TheLexicon
have more petals than that, make sure you're drawing what you see & not what you think you see. Hope that makes sense :)
TheLexicon
beautiful & creative otherwise keep it up