Ronakku
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Nov 11, 2015 3:20 AM
Ronakku
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lamppostian
+1 for Steven universe
thepsudo
If she ever makes a comic book, notify me. I'd buy the crap out of that.
InverseNarnia
It's average, encourage her and it'll be better
PurplePixieUK
You say average - the average person can't draw like that, but the average artist can. She's definitely a long artist who should stick at it
InverseNarnia
Which is what I'm saying
azzamatbagatov
Amazing may be a step too far
TotallyNotSarcastic
ehhh... 1 step, 7 steps... what's the difference, eh?
Snarkoleptic
It's OK. She should study more because although it's not up there yet, she does have the potential to be as good as the people she admires
washismycopilot
I really hope op got permission from his gf. Good morning - here's a pile of critiques. On the other hand - free critiques.
SeniorProDota2Player
My girlfriend is also an artist, and encouragement is a big influence on them. this is fantastic!
TheBoxingDandy
Lovin the Steve Universe inspired stuff
MinnesotaTom
OP's girlfriend shouldn't be discouraged. RISE UP AND CONQUER YOUR ART INSECURITIES ONE PENCIL STROKE AT A TIME
DignamWhenAskedaQuestion
LOL . He said " Stroke " the pencil.
TheBalderman
CRUSH YOUR INSECURITIES WITH DETERMINATION AND DRAW OVER YOUR RIVALS WITH THE MIGHT OF YOUR LINES AND INTENSITY OF YOUR COLORS
leelamb
The avocado is now my desktop.
AvocadosAtLaww
THIS GIRL IS THE BOMB AT HAIR! seriously though, that shits hard.
oldfishnewfish
Good. Not great. But good.
Therealbobbyflay
I like it! She's good!
0000000000000000000000
It's not great
kaffefilter
As a fellow artist; Always keep on creating! With every drawing an artist grows, changes and learns. Keep going girl!
madcore
Every artist has to being encouraged. Except Rob Liefeld. We need to punch hard in the face the one who encouraged Liefeld.
TooMuchPressureToThinkOfAWittyUsername
You had me at various avocados
HodorIsADJ
One of these things is not like the others.
SugoiPenguin
I too came for the art, but stayed for the avocados
UntitledUnmasteredDeluxe
;)
SugoiPenguin
Goddam that username
UntitledUnmasteredDeluxe
My life is complete
IronBrayden
people, people, avocados, people, people, people, people that kinda threw off lol
UntitledUnmasteredDeluxe
Well u know what they say ^
brutaloyster
Your GF is pretty fuckin' good.
TheGoodKevin
Pretty solid stuff
MyStrippernameisBubbles
Work on the eyes a bit. Other than that, as a whole, the art is great.
pistachiomoustache
The eyes are fine. It's the anatomy she needs to work on. :3
ZeldaShotFirst
Why?
autowronged
I like they eyes. Its like a Western take on anime with more character
MyStrippernameisBubbles
Valuebear12, thank you. That is what I meant.
eavalin
peridot is awesome ^..^ love steven universe
SquishyToeBeans
I love it personally! <3
beasty12321
This shit again, I already said stuff about this kind of post and how dumb it is.
LongNamesAreStillCoolRight
Tell her to work on anatomy, still life and shadows. Solid start.
hamfishstone
it's mediocre, like the rest f us.
Omorphia
These are good! She should practice proportion and skeletal structure but otherwise she's got great foundation. Keep encouraging her!
Noomzeu
But it's not amazing....
Kaslin
That Peridot is fucking adorbs.
fangwulf
Ferreals! I want that on a bumper sticker.
misterbatguano
I wouldn't say amazing, but it's pretty good. Worth seeing more of with some more practice.
DoubleShadows
With the whole figures, the balance often seemed off; the anatomy in general isn't the best. But she definitely has potential!
hette
Yep, anatomy. Honestly, I reckon she's reached the limit of how far she can go without anatomy. It's now the biggest thing that stands out.
ittybittyfeets
Isn't anatomical correctness more of a preference when working with cartoons/animation?
GhostTasha
You have to learn the rule to bend the rule.
DoubleShadows
This. 300% this.
chckenchaser
Solid understanding of figure construction and underlying structures is always important for consistency.
pistachiomoustache
The blue girl, while cute, is broken. Her legs are not in line with her waist. She has no butt/hips. Also, her arms are different lengths.
pistachiomoustache
She just needs practice with whole anatomy. I love the anatomy joint figurines. Mine helps a lot. http://imgur.com/rSSSyDV
surie
Is that Lars?