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PoonieUK
Anyone else start trying to read each sentence backwards? #imalittlebackwards
Fleaofpain
DrakeRamorayMD
SIRTOXIC13
Blood gushes from the cut and drips onto the ground an awful lot.
pelusita35
An awful lot drips onto the ground. From the cut drips blood and gushes.
katnponyshow
See writings by demetri martin
userbugs
Started from the bottom now we here
ReverseTrapTsukasa
Breathing hard I see the end. - I need to calm myself and prepare for what's next. - I spot the knife leaving the wound.
ReverseTrapTsukasa
Forward the murderer is coming down from the rush of killing and thinking about destroying evidence. Backwards the victim sees what happened
ReverseTrapTsukasa
to them and being a spiritual person is making peace before taking their last breath.
lochnessm0nster
It doesnt make as much sense backwards
ZachPutland
Redditors really aren't very good at writing but it seems like Redditors think that Redditors are great writers
Ipostrandomfactsaboutmyself
Agreed
Bibulus
I'd say the only part that makes less sense backwards is the two lines with blood gushing and knife stabbing, but they could still be read
Bibulus
as simultaneous, or alternatively as multiple stabbings.
PseudoEngel
Freaking love Luna.
Bleppo
Of course it would be Luna Lovewell. She's a writing machine.
landcfan
I didn't notice the rhymes until reading it backward.
ZachPutland
This sucks
TheCh0pperMan
Follow @dontbanmymemes
HockeyFighter69
@ilookfuckingcool I thought this was pretty good.
ilookfuckingcool
That's pretty hardcore and rad
HockeyFighter69
Mmm I love your descriptors even more.
ilookfuckingcool
Hahah thank you <3
HockeyFighter69
Anytime my love
ZSabre
"ballsy feeling you're if it for go...." I'm an idiot.
PeteThePerv
that was fucking awesome
LordGODMemester
Luna is a huge part of that sub. Her stories are pretty great. I find it hard to believe she's an amateur writer.
Suur
Her stuff on nosleep is absolutely amazing too
RELAVANTGIFMAKER
She got banned from that sub, I believe it was for pointing out how authors used cliffhangers to advertise ebooks
AVoiceOfReason
She was only banned for two months. She's not banned anymore.
RELAVANTGIFMAKER
username checks out
EroticZombiePants
"He killed me."
reallylamelol
2ndhandmemer
Waitinglikeastalkingbutler
I enjoyed this +1
ThatguythatsaysTHEEdumbestShit
So when does the movie come out...cause id watch the shit outta this tbh
DorMin2
One of the coolest music videos I've seen has basically this idea https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EN9auBn6Jys
MetroidPrimeHesTheBest
Wait shit, there’s another music video like this but it’s someone else (although +1 for Cibo Matto!)
MetroidPrimeHesTheBest
No wait it must be that because Michel Gondry directed it and I just didn’t know who Cibo Matto was at the time.
QuiteADapperAsshole
...how though?
ClimbThemCrimps
Wait what was that movie fucking forever ago, something with bombs & politics, it was supposed to be 8 minute story from many perspectives?
BeepBoopBlorpSchlorp
Came out a while ago, memento. (Kidding)
GaryDang3r
I was gonna say, with Christopher nolan as director. Then I saw your comment, seems like we had a similar line of thought.
Retromorphic
Kidding aside great film.
BeepBoopBlorpSchlorp
Great film. (Not kidding)
TheRicM
And it's like, parallel shots showing the two plots
amalgarhythm
So vantage point? Which is underrated. Not mind blowingly great but solid entertainment
Kynedath
I'm part of a community that has a few poems that read the exact same forwards and backwards (words, not letters, that's overboard). So fun.
KiwiGameDev
Damn it I’m mad, the only one in that category of poems I know haha
TheDouche
Son I am able, she said, though you scare me. Watch, said I, beloved, I said watch me scare you though, said she, able am I son.
Retromorphic
Kynedath
Screaming, I sacrifice for Sam -- my brother -- my life from youth, He takes that spear, this weapon with eager hands, 1/2
Kynedath
I need him, he needs me Hands eager with weapon, this spear that takes his youth from life, My brother, my Sam, for sacrifice, I scream 2/2
JSBM
But it's not the same...? Screaming/scream, me/I, him/he... And it is in prose..?
Kynedath
Root words remain the same. It's derived from a fake form of poem from a book I read. And it's meant to be in a more visual language/script
Bibulus
And it doesn't really make any sense
Kynedath
Give me a second, I need to find one again.
charlietrundlethegreat
It’s been about 5 mins, pal.
Kynedath
Apologies, formatting comments isn't my strong suit.
Retromorphic
I'm not your pal, friend.
ImYourOtherPersonality
r/writingprompts for those interested. Here's an excellent example:
aleister94
R/writingpromps never uses my promps
TheSealPushedMe
Maybe they want prompts instead
PseudoEngel
Don't give up. You'll get picked some day.
ImYourOtherPersonality
https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/3pyg3h/wp_a_day_before_the_earth_is_destroyed_by_a/
Sigge1981
Read through it, now. Am I missing something, or is it not finished? It was a fantastic read, but I want to know how it ends.
redturtleslide
It's finished. You have to click on "continue this thread" a few times though.
Sigge1981
Thanks! Must have missed that
tiufoo
I remember reading this awhile back. This caused me to start reading /r/WritingPrompts
Rapunzelatrose
Holy shit.
KingCarloso
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GrimlinKid
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ibrokemyselflmao
OH MY GOD... that story. 23 moved me to tears. Thank you for sharing
rikerman2020
. Because I can't finish all my f that tonight
FernandoBolio
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BraughtGurst
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hotpotatopie
doot doot, know what I'm doing in class tomorrow.
NotRaiko
Read it in class yesterday. Worth it.
musicgeekification
Doot to keep this to read again. That was awesome
TheSherriffofRottingham
I just got back. What year is it???
Rajjaet
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IlIlIlIlIlIlIlIlIlIlIlIlIlIlIl
That was simply amazing
kprice1234
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1erSani
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popnetic
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sweetganymede
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InsanityKiwi
Dot
skullified
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Surisuule
Remember this story, me.
Wowyouknowwhatsomanyusernamesaretakenthesedays
Fucking christ that was a wild ride.
DementedDaisy
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GeorgeNotTheLivestock
Geez louise, did not expect to get sucked into a story like that. Be warned that it is not brief. Worth it though.
stolencanofrusto
Doot
KrombopulusMichaelKiIls
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CharlesCarmichael
Is there a version of this story by user Paul that is all in one long continuous post?
sweetganymede
Somewhere down in the comments someone posted that they compiled the entire thing into one pdf. On my phone and it won’t let me open it tho
amed1c
.read on free time DOT
UHOHHSomersaultJUMP
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SayaImgur
I feel like I just read the best book ever written, except it's not a book. And they even left room for a sequel!
NotRaiko
*If you don't want spoilers don't open any replies to this comment chain*
NotRaiko
I would kill for a sequel. I want to know how his life changed on earth. And then what he's gonna do about the other galaxy!
HaniiPuppy
I think I've only ever written one long response to a post there. I don't think it's a masterpiece, it's probably a bit rubbish, but I ...
HaniiPuppy
... was still a wee bit sad that it went completely unnoticed. Link:
HaniiPuppy
https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/5z9zjg/wp_what_we_were_told_was_a_war_would_be_more/dey4na0/
existentialstew
That was pretty fun!
popnetic
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ImYourOtherPersonality
Oooh thanks! I'll be sure to check it out!