Jun 2, 2016 8:35 AM
katrose93
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OhHellMan
All I see is her poor fried hair!
Mysterym4n
Too much Photoshop. Lighting is too dramatic to give an accurate assessment of her modeling
GivingYourMeatAGoodOlRub
baldingrandpa
"Ever see someone in real life and they just look so.....tumblr?"
Zetor
The photographer needs to learn about lighting.
Redirishman23
2nd shot - head is thrown too far back, nice shot of her nostrils though. Unless an action is happening to the model.....just no.
LavaAxe
Nice juggs, but that's what this was all about, wasn't it?
battlellamma
The airbrush/photoshop job is way too much and too visible.
Iamthemanateeofdestruction
Gotta be honest, your facial expression is exactly the same in all the pictures and it's a very cheap one.
Pirogo3ther
If you ask for our opinion, my honest one would be: too much photoshop has been used, it is visible. OR maybe some people like it that way?
doitrightthistime
So sorry just an Amateur
DirtEOne
Do you want ratings? Cause this is how you get ratings!
Actually a perfect fitting gif, props
Lorithias
I don't like negative clarity .. :(
phantalor
it just begins with amateur model, and ends as porn star ...
tomhark
you have an interesting chest.
nogoodaccountnamesleft
Pretty girl, weird hair - that's what I think.
Kangarou
I think your photographer needs a better camera.
ChicksDigTrucks
I like the boobs. I don't like the Tumblr hair.
DoktorLurker
She's beautiful. The images are very good too.
SilverSwearsalot
Not a fan of the hair but crackin tits on her
haaska
I think that the photos are horridly airbrushed and the second one especially isn't flattering at all.
thebluespirit
Amateur... does that mean you just pay people to take photos of you? Or do they do it for free?
JustNotHavingAnyFun
You need either the face, or the body. Sorry.
castoocool
You're the prettiest girl in the..... Room...
DrHenryJonesJr
In the whole wide room.
tivvybrixx
she looks annoying. like she says patriarchy a lot but dosent really know what it means.
Anyway, she is pretty and willing to work with you, so you have that going for you.
CinnamonBunny
Should dye the hair again. But otherwise she is very nice.
ShoulderConnoisseur
Nice boobs
ArtemisOzzimmer
I thought this to the word. xD
grundles
Well, what was asked was answered.
DamezFramez
This
Iszekard
She's got those going for her, which is nice.
TakingCareOfBusiness
You could be a part time model...
GreenBarstardPartsUnknown
<3
FearlessFapper
and then I seal the deal. I do my moves, I do my dance moves.
DavyDavyDave
I'll buy you a KABAAAB!
thehannahconda
How did Dave get a hottie like that to a party like this?
TooLazyToDoSomethingElse
And when you're on the street, depending on the street, I bet that you are definitely in the top three good looking girls on the street
ohmygodtheysaidnewzealand
Depending on the street
only90skidswillgetthis
relevant username +1
insertsupercoolusernamehere
In the whole wide room!
Osdafromoz
...But you'd probably still have to keep your normal job...
emberfish
PAAAAAART time model!
batukhan
spending part of your time modeling.. and part of your time..
Nightgauntling
Might need to learn a few more facial expressions than just 'sultry'.
HumanCapybara
Have some respect for Blue Steel (tm).
I was trying so hard to critique without being funny, but the thought did occur to mind.
These are meant to be sultry, point of the shoot. Not all shoots are like this.
gewalt
you cant do sultry with that hair, it doesnt work.
No, I just mean, your facial expression in all three photos is extremely similar. I want you to have a portfolio with a little variety.
The first two are almost identical aside from a very slight change in angle of view. The third has a hand added and 3/4 view, but is-
essentially the exact same expression. Give them a show of your pretty bone structure and emotional range.
This is one of about 12 shoots, and 3 pictures of a set of about 10. Not all of them have this expression, i appreciate the advice though
OhHellMan
All I see is her poor fried hair!
Mysterym4n
Too much Photoshop. Lighting is too dramatic to give an accurate assessment of her modeling
GivingYourMeatAGoodOlRub
baldingrandpa
"Ever see someone in real life and they just look so.....tumblr?"
Zetor
The photographer needs to learn about lighting.
Redirishman23
2nd shot - head is thrown too far back, nice shot of her nostrils though. Unless an action is happening to the model.....just no.
LavaAxe
Nice juggs, but that's what this was all about, wasn't it?
battlellamma
The airbrush/photoshop job is way too much and too visible.
Iamthemanateeofdestruction
Gotta be honest, your facial expression is exactly the same in all the pictures and it's a very cheap one.
Pirogo3ther
If you ask for our opinion, my honest one would be: too much photoshop has been used, it is visible. OR maybe some people like it that way?
doitrightthistime
So sorry just an Amateur
DirtEOne
Do you want ratings? Cause this is how you get ratings!
katrose93
Actually a perfect fitting gif, props
Lorithias
I don't like negative clarity .. :(
phantalor
it just begins with amateur model, and ends as porn star ...
tomhark
you have an interesting chest.
nogoodaccountnamesleft
Pretty girl, weird hair - that's what I think.
Kangarou
I think your photographer needs a better camera.
ChicksDigTrucks
I like the boobs. I don't like the Tumblr hair.
DoktorLurker
She's beautiful. The images are very good too.
SilverSwearsalot
Not a fan of the hair but crackin tits on her
haaska
I think that the photos are horridly airbrushed and the second one especially isn't flattering at all.
thebluespirit
Amateur... does that mean you just pay people to take photos of you? Or do they do it for free?
JustNotHavingAnyFun
You need either the face, or the body. Sorry.
castoocool
You're the prettiest girl in the..... Room...
DrHenryJonesJr
In the whole wide room.
tivvybrixx
she looks annoying. like she says patriarchy a lot but dosent really know what it means.
Redirishman23
Anyway, she is pretty and willing to work with you, so you have that going for you.
CinnamonBunny
Should dye the hair again. But otherwise she is very nice.
ShoulderConnoisseur
Nice boobs
ArtemisOzzimmer
I thought this to the word. xD
grundles
Well, what was asked was answered.
DamezFramez
This
Iszekard
She's got those going for her, which is nice.
TakingCareOfBusiness
You could be a part time model...
GreenBarstardPartsUnknown
<3
FearlessFapper
and then I seal the deal. I do my moves, I do my dance moves.
DavyDavyDave
I'll buy you a KABAAAB!
thehannahconda
How did Dave get a hottie like that to a party like this?
TooLazyToDoSomethingElse
And when you're on the street, depending on the street, I bet that you are definitely in the top three good looking girls on the street
ohmygodtheysaidnewzealand
Depending on the street
only90skidswillgetthis
relevant username +1
insertsupercoolusernamehere
In the whole wide room!
Osdafromoz
...But you'd probably still have to keep your normal job...
emberfish
PAAAAAART time model!
batukhan
spending part of your time modeling.. and part of your time..
Nightgauntling
Might need to learn a few more facial expressions than just 'sultry'.
HumanCapybara
Have some respect for Blue Steel (tm).
Nightgauntling
I was trying so hard to critique without being funny, but the thought did occur to mind.
katrose93
These are meant to be sultry, point of the shoot. Not all shoots are like this.
gewalt
you cant do sultry with that hair, it doesnt work.
Nightgauntling
No, I just mean, your facial expression in all three photos is extremely similar. I want you to have a portfolio with a little variety.
Nightgauntling
The first two are almost identical aside from a very slight change in angle of view. The third has a hand added and 3/4 view, but is-
Nightgauntling
essentially the exact same expression. Give them a show of your pretty bone structure and emotional range.
katrose93
This is one of about 12 shoots, and 3 pictures of a set of about 10. Not all of them have this expression, i appreciate the advice though